The final draft allowed me to take into consideration the clarity that I had when I was laser focused on my paper. I admired how well I was able to lay out my points with no physical form of primary sources, instead with the information that was able to stick to my head. I learned that even though as a writer you would think you are expanding on your point enough you’re never really expanding enough, and there is always room for more clarity. I wish I would have dove deeper in some points that I made however overall the premises of the paper was well done.  Another point that I will work on in the future would be being less repetitive with certain words.  In my opinion, I was able to synthesize and properly explain the quotes while not sounding like I am just reciting what the quotes are stating.